[An Event of Ice and Shadow]: Black Ice Haikus

[ReleaseTheEvil]

BLACK ICE HAIKUS

Welcome everyone to Black Ice Haikus. In this game, you submit haikus related to a shadow or ice theme. Players will receive 5 points for their first Haiku entry and the person who submits the best Haiku (judged by yours truly) will win an additional 5 points. You may submit more than 1 Haiku but you will only receive 5 points for one Haiku, and 5 more only if you win. As per Wikipedia, "A typical haiku is a three-line quirky observation about a fleeting moment involving nature.".

Feel free to have fun and be really creative with this! And let the best (coldest and shadowiest) Haiku win

Players

PANCHI - Winner

Sooh

Tina

Nikon

Ley

Ithi

Turin

[Panchi]

I am trying but don't expect me to get syllables right (and I am not even trying to get it right)

 

Staring at ice

With a cool breeze blowing

Chill seeps things deep

[Sooh]

Here's my try 

 

 

 

Underwater world

Hidden by a veil of glass 

Until sun shatters

[ReleaseTheEvil]

Don't worry about the correct syllables!

 

Great job! Let's get some more! 

[Niniel]

Great! Now I need to try one. 

[Niniel]

I´m so bad at this. I really need to practice.

 

 

sunny winter day

icicles slowly let go

shatters against earth

[Nikonis]

Not really good but I'll give it a try

 

Cold Winter morning

Car begins to swerve

Black ice is dangerous

[ReleaseTheEvil]

Awesome, more please  

[Leyrann]

Don't swim for the light

For that is ice

Swim for the dark of water

[Ithillian Turambar]

There's salt on my step

Because if it wasn't there

My bottom would be.

[Turin Turambar]

clear as finest glass

beware not to go too fast

for surely you'll crash

 

I think that adds up? maybe 

[Niniel]

You are so good at this. Let´s see if I can do another one. 

[ReleaseTheEvil]

These were all excellent and it was a tough decision but the winner is...

 

PANCHI!

 

Congratulations and thanks everyone for playing!

[Niniel]

Congrats, Panchi!

[Wren of the Brown]

Oh! Haiku! I'm late! Congrats, Panchi!

 

The hills grew ice-slick,

Birds silent with long dread.

Frost crowns the Winter King's head.